Re: Magnus' Summer Outdoor - Soil 15 AK47, Crit Mass, Ice Bomb, NL, Big Bud, Pin Expr
I would have never identified it as such, but I've been inattentive over here. Forgive me.
I like the illustrations you chose, particularly the way the first and last have an eerie, slightly threatening feel to them. Number three doesn't work for me at all, but I think it's the monotone greens overwhelming the message. Try a different color font with it.
The second one feels a little delicious, with the luscious sunflowers and the font backlit by the white. The backlighting works really well to catch your eye and translate a bit of discomfort to the psyche. That's the effect you were going for, wasn't it? Well done.
The fourth one might pop more if you play with the color of the font in the closing line. Something that brings an ominous feel to it.
Keep trying other quotes. In my opinion, four of your five photos are keepers. Good eye. The meadow lacks something. As to the quotes, the only one that really rang big bells for me is the last one, and it hits powerfully. Definately keep that one, but the others I'd rework.
Having fun with that? It'll keep you busy, bringing your dreams into manifestation. Thanks for asking for my input. I love doing this type of stuff.
I would have never identified it as such, but I've been inattentive over here. Forgive me.
I like the illustrations you chose, particularly the way the first and last have an eerie, slightly threatening feel to them. Number three doesn't work for me at all, but I think it's the monotone greens overwhelming the message. Try a different color font with it.
The second one feels a little delicious, with the luscious sunflowers and the font backlit by the white. The backlighting works really well to catch your eye and translate a bit of discomfort to the psyche. That's the effect you were going for, wasn't it? Well done.
The fourth one might pop more if you play with the color of the font in the closing line. Something that brings an ominous feel to it.
Keep trying other quotes. In my opinion, four of your five photos are keepers. Good eye. The meadow lacks something. As to the quotes, the only one that really rang big bells for me is the last one, and it hits powerfully. Definately keep that one, but the others I'd rework.
Having fun with that? It'll keep you busy, bringing your dreams into manifestation. Thanks for asking for my input. I love doing this type of stuff.