This song I wrote

[Bud Toker]

ok this is a song that i wrote one day during class. i was really bored and fucked up on adderall. haha. but tell me what you think of it. I played guitar to it and recorded it on my cell phone but i dont really know if i can get it on here.

Don't Mind Me

Not singing much
Just to the birds and the bees
My minds wondering off
Lost in a green sea
Waiting to get out
Waiting to be free

Flying high in the air
Oh so high and i dont even care
But will god always be there?
To hold me up in these infinite skys?
Or will he leave me in this corrupt world
Left to rot and fuckin die

Don't mind me
I'm dieing slowly
I don't see with my eyes
Imaging more with my brain
Always being paranoid
Is the reason I'm insane

 

[CherryEyed]

riiight.

Seems a little sad, droney, y'know?

 

[a5litrenweed]

if it was acoustic and sung right it would be tight, maybe u could play it hard to but ya i like it nice job

 

[Marianne]

Right on for using your creative side dude. Most people are too scared of rejection to even try to write songs. It is a little sad, but I like sad music too.