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The Edge
"Im Over my head, im outta my head"
I was standing at the edge...It started when I was a group of friends than I saw it. As soon as I laid my eyes upon it, it sucked me in. I started to wander off my stare set on my destination. As I got closer to it my heart started to beat faster, my breath started to increase rapidly as a smile came over my face. There before me was a trail of beautiful white clouds and at the end of this trail, was not just a trail of white clouds but a sea. I began my walk towards the end. Each step I took closer to the end of the path the greater my anticipation grew. I finally reached the end taking a deep breath inviting the beauty into my veins to surge through me, get me high. A smile came across my face, I was ready. I was ready to walk across theses clouds, than I realized...these weren't clouds it was a lake covered in white snow, the realization quickly disappeared. I was still smiling at this time. I stepped off the trail and onto the clouds I started to cry I couldn't believe how amazing I felt. I took another step the tears continued to flow. I walked and walked never seeming to reach the end. Than I heard it, the cracking under my feet, the clouds were breaking in for me, to let me stay here with them. I feel into the water the freezing warmth took over my body. I closed my eyes feeling it encompassing my body, I welcomed it. I slowly opened my mouth breathing in the sweet air, as my thoughts began to fade I felt completely happy. For when people hear I died in a horrible death, I would say to them "I didn't die in sorrow, I died in complete and utter peace"

...one of the storys i wrote when i was high... :grinjoint:
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This story is....odd, but well written. Mind if I try and summarize? Tell me if I'm completely wrong, but this is what I understand from it...

SPOILER!!!
(Highlight the white words below to read if you have read the story...)

***A guy is hiking with a bunch of friends, when suddenly he is taken by beautiful scenery. He wanders off alone in a daze, headed for the clouds in the distance. As he gets closer, he see's them as a foggy sea, but then as he gets even closer, he realizes that the fog is a frozen lake. So he decides to try and walk across the lake, but the ice under his feet cracks and he falls in. Sinse he is so serene, he lets the freezing water drown him. But at least he died happy?***
 
cool man thats got some mad cool imagry to it
 
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